By Elias Zanbaka
Reviewed by Heath Henwood
This short story lack the cohension required to be a successfully marketable book.
The premise for the plot, while not entirely new, is the best part of the book. What it lacks is a professional edit.
It reads like a high schoolers story that has been encouraged to give every noun and verb its own action packed description. Not only does this take away from the story, it makes it difficult to read.
There is a message behind the story, although honestly, it could be better put, and drawn out with a longer text, that creates tension.
Thank you to the author for providing a review copy in return for an honest review. All opinions expressed in this review are entirely my own.
Heath writes reviews regularly for newspapers and magazines.